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Kkaras Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Nice artwork as always. I think I've confirmed I'm a geek more than a man. I see the picture, of course I see the lovely chest. Then the numbers on the short. What do I notice next?

Any red blooded male (or female batting for the home team) would notice the seductive things she's doing with her panties. Me ... I saw the bloody cell phone!

The magazine (just curiosity) was the title supposed to be Bleeper? Since the head covers that area up its hard to tell what it was supposed to be. Nice that you used an actual beer name and not some el generico title for the cans.

Ok ... commentary!

The left hand, the lines around the hand itself seem to be a bit heavy. It might be the color, but it looks more noticeable than the rest of the arm. The feet look good, but I'm pretty sure I've commented on your feet before, so no need to comment again. Though it might have been another artist. The big toe on both feet looks a bit long.

The fifth beam of light(the one that goes under her breasts) from the top goes two directions just after her body. All the rest are 'straight'. It stands out enough I noticed it.

That's about all I can see that is 'wrong' with the image. Minor things, but honest critiques are always good. As long as they're not "you suck, give it up, I can draw better!"
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Frank-Beer Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014   Photographer
Wonderful work, truly great! :)
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xavierrulez Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well im thinking this is ...
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xavierrulez Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
also is there a second one your working on
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Harraya Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
is that you?
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x-Nekopunch-x Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
Mhhh, is it ? :D
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Harraya Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
whoa,
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nanitavelez Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Great!
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x-Nekopunch-x Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Thanks :)
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ArcticRcade Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Trying to see whats on her phone screen. lol 
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